Originally Posted by
DankBlaniels
I hate replying to rep but in this case i will.
well thank you so very much for making mention of the fact that you are going out of your way to oblige us all with a response.
This is one of the things that tilts me the most about your writing.
Ah, yes, do tell us all how you feel as quickly as possible.
Often you will start telling a story then go off on a massive tangent, start ranting about the bible or whatever and then not finish the story.
Is that what he does"? How does that make you
feel?
It seems like when you write you dive right in there with a basic idea and then basically make it up as you go along. Maybe you need to make a plan before you start and stick to it.
SCUTER IS THIS TRUE? ARE YOU DIVING RIGHT INTO THINGS AND THEN MAKING IT UP AS YOU GO ALONG?
ANSWER THIS MAN, DON'T YOU
CARE HOW HE FEELS??
For sure i am not the best person to be giving feedback as i m not much of a writer as i lack the patience but that is my opinion. If you did decide to write a book about your life it would definately make interesting reading. I would certainly be keen to read it am sure many others would and not just those who know you through the forums.
frankly I am fucking
stunned that this was not the work of a teary eyed 8 year old boy writing a letter to santa clause begging for a bb gun and for his brothers not to all die in japan or something...carry on, I suppose...
Maybe a good way to try and get started would be to break your life down in to different stages and then start writing a little bit about each one.
yup
Make sure you keep each chapter just about that subject and then add to them or change them later on.
you betcha
Try to avoid coming across as preaching to the reader and just concentrate on your experiences.
maybe he does try? i'm just saying, is all...
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